Initial Screening.

I showed my initial screening to my media class, who gave me feedback using a system of creative commentary to explain what I have done well and creative suggestions to advise me about what I need to film/refilm.



Some common features that were on my creative commentary were:

• Good locations.
• Some good techniques such as foot tapping or close up of guitar strings.

Some common features on my creative suggestions were:

• Hood should be down, looks too harsh.
• More energy and upbeat to match song beat and pace. Faster edits etc.
• More literal to show lyrics as it is quite a literal song.
• Camera movements to match songs.
• Livelier performer.
• More narrative.

Digipak and advert for digipak practise.

I have practised working on Photoshop before actually creating my final digipak and advert for digipak. This has proved to be useful as it has made me feel more comfortable with this piece of software. Although I have not got complete images for these yet, I have been able to try out my rough ideas.